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Miacis Writing 02

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This story takes place in another school. There wasn't as much security and students could get away more easely from fighting or pranking. This story is about an amazing prankster and the joke he'll never forget. The 14 years old boy wore the red uniform like all his comerades, only rather than wear a tie or a bow, he wore his grey scarf around his neck. What was more noticeable about him was his impressibve rock wings and his mighty big dinosaur tail.

One day, the boy came across an oil bottle meant to be used in cooking. While he was alone in the hall of the school he attended, he though of a way to entertain himself. He opened the bottle and spilled it all over the floor, turning it into a dangerous slippery zone. He leaned against the wall, waiting for his victims to pass. Eventually, another boy came, a blue monkey boy, that kid just so happened to be the prankster rival, he was the perfect victim. When the monkey boy slipped and hit the wall, the prankster had an hard time to hold back his laughter. Just to make it worst, the monkey boy's clothes were covered in oil and had to be washed. Conveniently enough the monkey boy was a water type and could of cleaned his clothes on his on, but by the time he figured out he'd make a mess in the hall by using his water moves there, he already took off his clothes. Once the monkey boy ran off with barely anything on, the prankster could laugh his rear off.

A year as passed since that event. Never did a prank from that amazing boy went this well. He doesn't go along too well with the monkey boy, now a monkey man though.
The amazing prankster: [link]

:iconmiacisplz::iconsaysplz:"Ahaha oh man the souvenirs!"

Pokemon belong to Nintendo
Miacis is mine
The Monkey Boy/Man isn't, but he might want to stay hidden XD;
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:iconjessica-defalco: :iconsaysplz: Based on the Grading scale that I Have not gone over yet, here is my grading system. [7 point scale]
Spelling: -3 points
Grammar: -6 points
Pros: ^^ A very interesting story. Love that your style is so informal!
Cons: Need to work on Run-on Sentences. Watch your spelling too.
Letter Grade: 91/B